Response to reviewer
### Weaknesses
> My main concern with the paper is the presentation, which is very dense and at times difficult to understand. For instance, many of the equations in Section 4 are presented without much motivation or intuitive explanation. It seems at some points that the authors include additional mathematical details which are unconnected to the main message of the paper (e.g., discussing nonparameteric density estimation on line 188); it might be best to omit these and devote the room instead to making other points more clear. I have listed some specific problems with the writing below.
Thank you for this feedback. We have now made several updates in the revised pdf to improve Section 4, and have included additional motivations for individual definitions. We have further addressed all issues listed below. Specifically, we made the following changes:
- We have moved parts of the POMDP notation from section 3.1 to the appendix.
- We have moved details on the game-theoretic intractability of the zero-sum game $\mathcal{G}$ between the victim and the attacker to the appendix (see paragraph 3 in section 4.1).
- We have created a new section in the appendix devoted to the illusory objective estimator. We have moved our references to non-parametric density estimation (paragraph 2 in section 4.2), alongside comments on particle filtering and nested estimator bias (formerly at the end of section 4).
> Additionally, I found many of the figures had only limited explanation. I don't find Figure 1 to be so clear—there is a lot going on and I could only understand it completely after going through the rest of the paper.
We have updated the caption of this figure to make it more accessible and welcome any additional feedback here. We have also included an explanatory paragraph in Section 4.
> Figure 2 is presented with only high-level explanation in the paper, and it's not clear what all the arrows and lines mean.
We have redone this Figure, added additional explanations about the different graphical elements, and have also updated the caption accordingly. We are thankful for any additional feedback.
> Algorithm 1 is confusing since p($\emptyset$) and p($o_{old}$,$a_{old}$) seem to be undefined and there is no captionon.
$p$ is defined in the MDP definition in the Background (Section 3.1), as the probabilistic state transition function of the MDP (conditioned on the last observation and action), while p($\emptyset$) refers to the initial state distribution. We have now clarified this further in Algorithm 1.
> Specific issues:
> Line 132: I believe it should be $\text{supp}\ \xi(\cdot|s)\subseteq\mathcal{B}(s)$
We believe that our notation $\text{supp}\ \xi(\cdot|s)\in\mathcal{B}(s)$ is correct, as $\mathcal{B}(s)$ is a superset of $\mathcal{S}$ (note that $\mathcal{B}(s)$ is the powerset of $\mathcal{S}$).
> The definition of additive perturbations on line 134 is a bit confusing. First, why are the perturbations themselves in the state space $\mathcal{S}$. Shouldn't they be in $\mathbb{R}^{d}$ where $\mathcal{S}\subseteq\mathbb{R}^{d}$? Second, the $\delta$ notation for a point mass is not previously introduced.
Thank you for this remark. We now introduce $\delta$ in Section 3 and have fixed the clerical error in the definition of additive perturbations ($\varphi_t \in \mathbb{R}^d$).
> Line 225: I believe "relative entropy" is actually another term for KL-divergence, and what is mean is "cross entropy." The notation used of is standard for "joint entropy," though! So this is quite confusing—it would be best to clean up the notation. […]
Thank you for this remark, this was indeed a typo and we had meant to write cross entropy. We have fixed this now and also updated the notation, citing the relevant book to avoid any confusion.
> In Algorithm 1, $\hat{D}_{KL}$ is not defined.
We apologize for this mistake. We have now addressed this; $\hat{D}_{KL}$ is a trailing window estimate of the average constraint violation used to update the dual variable $\lambda$.
### Questions
>In Figure 5, it seems strange to the detection rate averaged across environments for human detection and automated detection when one is only evaluated on two environments and the other is evaluated on all four. Since the automated detection rate is already shown in Figure 4, why not just show the automated detection rate for the environments where human detection was tested in Figure 5?
Response: We acknowledge that the presentation was not ideal, as the limitations of the detection rate analysis were only mentioned in the bottom left corner and could be missed easily. We have now split this plot into two individual plots (one for automated and one for human detection).