Summary
The paper generalizes predictive coding as a method of training neural networks to Hopfield networks, giving a model of temporal predictive coding (tPC). tPC proves itself able to memorize discrete sequences at a level competitive with Asymmetric Hopfield Networks in experiments, and provides an intriguing hint as to the potential function of statistical whitening in the hippocampus.
Strengths
The authors provide a strong mathematical grounding and linkage to the predictive coding literature. Temporal predictive coding shows the interesting strength that as the correlation between features in a sequence increases, it does not appear to significantly lose much of its capacity -- no doubt due to the implicit statistical whitening. They perform an experimental evaluation against sequential versions of the Modern Hopfield Network and the Modern Continuous Hopfield Network, though not against non-Hopfield sequence learning or cognitive mapping models.
Weaknesses
The authors overclaim about biological/neural "memories" from the first sentence of the abstract. This becomes important because lossless sequence memorization is not what the hippocampus does, and if it did, it would be useless. This leaves the major unaddressed question being: can the paper's tPC model generalize to unseen but reasonably similar sequences? What features of the sequences can change without disrupting memorization?
Questions
Can the authors address any of the literature in the learning of cognitive maps in the hippocampus? Those often provide a connection to discrete event sequences and would give the authors a baseline to compare to beyond just the Hopfield networks they use.
Rating
7: Accept: Technically solid paper, with high impact on at least one sub-area, or moderate-to-high impact on more than one areas, with good-to-excellent evaluation, resources, reproducibility, and no unaddressed ethical considerations.
Confidence
4: You are confident in your assessment, but not absolutely certain. It is unlikely, but not impossible, that you did not understand some parts of the submission or that you are unfamiliar with some pieces of related work.
Limitations
Are the authors aiming their model and their claims at the computational or algorithmic Marr levels of analysis? Even if they're aiming at the algorithmic level, predictive coding has been proposed to approximate backpropagation in certain limits, and so they could have compared against backprop-trained memory models in which the backprop training was replaced with a sufficient predictive coding architecture. Likewise, there are plenty of cognitive mapping models at the computational model which are not analytically tractable, but which do admit sampling/Monte Carlo implementations that can attain neural plausibility. Why the restricted class of comparisons? Are the authors specifically proposing that the brain performs all necessary computations in closed form?
EDIT: The authors have fully addressed my concern about closed-form computation, which then places their tPC model within the class of things to which I requested comparison. This is very good!