Summary
This work provides a theoretical connection between two related phenomena in deep learning dynamics: the structural change to the empirical NTK during training, specifically its alignment with class labels; and the neural collapse, which refers to a set of behaviors exhibited by NNs trained on multiway classification. The authors asked whether the first phenomenon causes the second, and studied NN dynamics under a toy-model NTK that has a block structure.
Strengths
Both neural collapse and NTK alignment are prominent empirical features of DNN learning (at least in some cases), and the authors provided a careful treatment of a relevant toy model that connects the two. The writing is clear despite the convoluted nature of the subject (speaking as someone who has written on this specific topic before). Assumptions, claims and proven results are easy to find and understand.
Weaknesses
My primary concern is with the amount of insight that this work brings.
(1) The central question posed by the authors, in line 37, is stated as "does NTK alignment lead to neural collapse?". But I do not understand the cause-and-effect relation implied here. It has been long understood that NTK provides a dual perspective to NN training dynamics. So much as the NTK does not "lead to" the reduction of loss in NN training, NTK alignment does not "lead to" neural collapse.
(2) My second point is closely related to the first one. The assumptions about the NTK kernel and feature kernel in Sec. 2.2 are motivated by empirical observations of trained NNs and make ensuing analysis simpler. But I'm concerned that they are sufficiently strong to "guarantee" neural collapse -- these are very strong assumptions and already imply that the NN representation/dynamics are in a stage where things are "collapse-y". In other words, on a conceptual level, this work risks falling into a circular logic -- if we assume the NN is in neural collapse, we can derive that it is in neural collapse. This work does not touch on the topic of how the kind of block-like structure arises, which in my view is what "causes" neural collapse (Conceptually, I think the emergence of block-like kernels and NC are two sides of the same coin).
(3) As the authors pointed out, an important implication of NC is the generalization benefits that it brings. The current analysis, however, appears to entirely focus on the training set. This is a limitation shared by previous work on empirical NTK dynamics, though.
(4) A minor point, but I find Sec. 4.1 to be a little excessive. It is well known that if you do regression with a kernel, eigenstructure of the kernel determines how quickly different components of the target vector gets learned. There are plenty of prior work on the subject. Perhaps it is good to cite them and shorten this section.
Questions
I wonder how much the analysis can be generalized to weakened assumptions about the kernels? For example, instead of assuming that the kernel has a block-like structure, can we assume that it has the form K=K0 + Kb, where Kb is the block-like structure proposed by the authors, and K0 is the eNTK at initialization? I think this is a much more realistic assumption about the dynamics of NN learning.
I also welcome additional comments from the authors about the insights (of course, what counts as "insights" is different for different people!) that this work brings about the emergence of block structures / NC.
Rating
6: Weak Accept: Technically solid, moderate-to-high impact paper, with no major concerns with respect to evaluation, resources, reproducibility, ethical considerations.
Confidence
4: You are confident in your assessment, but not absolutely certain. It is unlikely, but not impossible, that you did not understand some parts of the submission or that you are unfamiliar with some pieces of related work.
Limitations
Please see weaknesses. There are no negative societal impact. I appreciate the author discussing the weakness of making the assumptions in 3.2