Summary
The paper proposes a CDF based acquisition function for black-box multi-objective optimization (MOO). The basic idea is to use the CDF function as a criterion for the next point selection and the authors discuss a connection between CDF and multivariate rank. To evaluate the CDF, a copula based approach is introduced by which the authors claim scalability and invariance properties are obtained.
Weaknesses
Overall, the description is unclear. For example, although the CDF plays a key role, the distribution of CDF is not explicitly written in the methodology section. In appendix, I found the authors used multi-task GP. Another example is \hat{f} in (3.8) suddenly appear without explanation (explained in the experimental section), by which the definition of the acquisition function becomes unclear at that point.
As mentioned above, the authors used multi-task GP, but for GP based MOO (i.e., BO), except for a few studies (e.g., Shah and Ghahraman 2016), typically uses independent GPs for multiple objectives. When the independent GPs are used, CDF is quite easy to evaluate (just by multiplying one dimensional CDFs). However, the author does not mention importance of modeling correlation among objectives. In practice, independent GPs often show sufficient (or better) performance compared with multi-task GP (for which task-correlation must be carefully tuned to achieve good performance).
Rationale behind the CDF based criterion is unclear. For simplicity, consider the case of independent Gaussian for each objective, which would be the simplest special case. Then, CDF becomes just a multiplication of each dimension of CDF, which intensely seeks a `specific direction' of the output space though, in MOO, the Pareto frontier should exist in a variety of direction of the output space. In this sense, in my current understanding, the proposed acquisition function is not appropriate for exploring the entire Pareto frontier that can be widely distributed in the output space. Even when correlated model is used, this problem would not be avoided.