Response to Reviewer om5H29
We appreciate the reviewer's efforts in helping us with improving the manuscript and providing an opportunity to make clarifications. We have corrected the minor typo as suggested. Please find our point-by-point response below.
> 1. I don't think the proposed Q-learning framework fits this problem. In fact, the proposed Q-network cannot see the interaction of patients; changing $a_i$ does not change $Q_\\theta(s)_{j,a_j}, j\\neq i$ . Please clarify if this is not the case.
We appreciate the reviewer for bringing this out. We would like to provide further clarification regarding patient interactions within our model. Patient interactions are considered in both the states and actions. In terms of states, each patient state $s_i$, is input into the transformer framework as an individual token. Consequently, changing the value of $s_i$ can impact all $Q_\\theta(s)_{j,a_j}, j\\neq i$, due to the attention mechanism within the transformer architecture. This interaction is analogous to how changing a single word in a sentence affects the output embeddings of all other words in the sentence, considering the contextual information. We also conducted experiments (DDQN-individual model in Appendix 5) where interactions were ignored, and changing the value of $s\_i$ did not impact any $Q\_\\theta(s)\_{j,a\_j}, j\\neq i$. This interaction-ignored model exhibited lower performance in terms of both survival rate and fairness.
Regarding actions, the interaction lies in the constraints imposed by the available ventilators, denoted as $B$. Modifying the action $a\_i$ will not affect $Q\_\\theta(s)\_{j,a\_j}, j\\neq i$. However, it does have an influence on the greedy action, $a^* = \\arg\\max\_{a \\in\\mathcal{A}} Q(s,a)$, which is determined by identifying the extra extra ($B-|I|$)-largest indices of $ \\{ (Q\_\\theta(s)\_{i, 1} -Q\_\\theta(s)\_{i, 0}) | 1\\leq i \\leq N, I\_i=0\\}$. For instance, if we change $a\_i$ from 1 to 0, indicating that a patient's ventilator is freed up, the count of patients already on ventilation ($|I|$ ) decreases by 1, and the greedy action will be adjusted to find the extra ($B-|I-1|$) indices of $ \\{ (Q\_\\theta(s)\_{i, 1} -Q\_\\theta(s)\_{i, 0}) | 1\\leq i \\leq N, I\_i=0\\}$ to allocate ventilators. Therefore, the action $a\_j$ , whose $Q\_\\theta(s)\_{j, 1} -Q\_\\theta(s)\_{j, 0}$ ranks exactly at the $B-|I-1|$ position will change from 0 to 1.
> 2. It's not clear what value this Q function is estimating. Further elaboration is required here.
The Q function estimates the expected cumulative reward (Eq. (5)) when allocating ventilators under the constraint of the total available ventilators, taking into account the clinical conditions of the patients. This Q function estimates a trade-off between the survival rate of all patients and the fairness of allocation across different ethnoracial groups. To address computational challenges, we decomposed the overall $Q(s,a)$ into the sum of individual $Q_\\theta(s)_{i,a_i}$ and used an attention mechanism to consider interactions among patients. We have included a clarification of the Q function in Section 4 of the revision.
> 3. I cannot see how survival rate as a measure of performance is estimated from offline data. What off-policy technique is used?
Thank you for your question. We've developed a simulator using real-world data, obviating the need for off-policy evaluation techniques. The simulator allows us to directly evaluate our proposed strategy and compare its performance with existing protocols. The usage of a simulator derived from real-world clinical data also enhances the utility of our proposed model compared to off-policy techniques. Within the simulator, a patient progresses to their subsequent stage in the real clinical trajectory if a ventilator is allocated; otherwise, they experience immediate decease due to ventilator shortage. The death count comprises patient fatalities within their clinical progressions and those resulting from insufficient ventilation. The survival rate is simply calculated as 1 minus the death rate. In addition, we present results from alternative simulators in the appendix, the simulators where patients do not progress to immediate death in the absence of ventilators.