Summary
The submission "Mirror Diffusion Models for Constrained and Watermarked Generation" describes a new approach to generate constrained data with diffusion models. Using mirror maps, the diffusion process proceeds as usual in an unconstrained space, but the generated data can be converted into the constraint space through the bijective mirror map.
The submission discusses (toy) applications in constrained generation onto a ball and a simplex, and an application of this approach to watermarking of diffusion model outputs.
Strengths
The proposed approach using tools from convex optimization to encode convex constraints into the generation process is simple and elegant. The submission also spends a good amount of time on exposition of examples for commonly-used mirror maps, which I think will be very beneficial to the wider readership.
The application to watermarking is a suprising, but interesting connection that the submission draws, discussing an immediate beneficial application of the proposed approach. Overall I consider this a strong submission.
Weaknesses
I think I fully understood the submission up to Section 5.2, which is quite compressed (probably due to space reasons), and I found it hard to fully understand. I'll enumerate these questions below in the questions section.
Otherwise, I see no major weaknesses. There are some typos, which I'll briefly mention:
* In standard Euclidean spaces, tractable marginal can be
* The marginal q(yt−1 |yt , y0 ) hints the optimal reverse
Appendix:
* Boarder impact
* polytop
Questions
* Just for my understanding: For MDM-proj, the output of a given, pretrained diffusion model, is project onto the constraint set after generation? And for MDM-dual, a new model is trained/fine-tuned is trained on contraint-projected samples?
* The polytope constraint for the watermark is hard for me to understand intuitively, what is being constrained here? The pixel space of the generated image is constrained to fulfil a random projection into a random interval? Intuitively, it is not clear to me why the impact of this constraint on the generated images is not larger?
* Related to question 1, does this mean that only MDM-proj can use multiple tokens for multiple users, and MDM-dual needs to retrain a new model for every new token?
* Why is the precision of the watermark less than 100%? From my understanding of the preceding sections, a constraint violation should be excluded? Why are images being generated that violate the constraints?
Overall, I hope the authors could clarify these questions and rewrite Section 5.2 to be easier to understand.
A few more questions/comments:
* The functions phi are almost Legendre functions in the sense that they are essentially smooth and essentially strictly convex. Is the twice-differentiability needed in principle (aside from Eq.(8)?
* The reduction to a bjiective map in Eq.(18) is a bit unsatisfying. I think it would be neater to derive the base function for this tanh shift
* Slightly related, Legendre functions do not seem to be strictly needed to generate the mirror maps in this work? Technically, a strictly monotone operator (as defined e.g. in "Convex Analysis and Monotone Operator Theory in Hilbert Spaces" ) would be sufficient? (This is more of a side question concerning the notation, I don't think that too much is gained by generalizing this way)
* Is it possible to derive p-values for the watermarked model to quantify the uncertainty about the watermark, as was done in Kirchenbauer 2023? From a practical perspective watermark, precision is not the primary objective for a watermark, but precision with a low false-positive rate of the resulting detection scheme.
Rating
7: Accept: Technically solid paper, with high impact on at least one sub-area, or moderate-to-high impact on more than one areas, with good-to-excellent evaluation, resources, reproducibility, and no unaddressed ethical considerations.
Confidence
4: You are confident in your assessment, but not absolutely certain. It is unlikely, but not impossible, that you did not understand some parts of the submission or that you are unfamiliar with some pieces of related work.
Limitations
The authors sufficiently discuss broader impact in the appendix.