Strengths
1. The paper poses an intriguing research question:
"How is the $\epsilon$-stationary distributed after running SGD for T iterations on a nonconvex problem?"
While the question is compelling, I intuitively feel that it might not have a definitive answer. The distribution can vary significantly depending on the function in question, as elaborated later.
2. The paper adopts a weak assumption on the distribution of the noise.
Weaknesses
1. The guarantees provided for the iterations in the tail are weak or even trivial. Basically, it is based on the argument that: if we only consider the last $\eta T$ iterations, when telescope, we just throw away the first $(1-\eta T)$ terms as we sum up the gradient norms. In other words, we can consider it as two stages, in the first stage of $(1-\eta T)$ iterations, the function value will follow some descent lemma up to an extra term in noise (depending on C and $\gamma_t^2$), i.e., the last term in (3), which is summable; the second stage of last $\eta T$ iterations, it just follow the normal analysis for SGD. Such an argument in Theorem 2, 3, and 4 is not very meaningful because:
a. The results contain $\eta T$ on the right-hand side of (6). This means that the guarantee of the tail $\eta T$ iterations for running T iterations is not better, or even worse, than if we just run $\eta T$ iterations in total. If the dependence on $\eta$ is better than linear, (e.g. $\eta^{0.9} T$) it would be more meaningful.
2. The paper missed some of the most relevant references:
[1] Orabona, F. (2020). Almost sure convergence of sgd on smooth nonconvex functions. Blogpost on http://parameterfree. com, available at https://parameterfree. com/2020/10/05/almost-sure-convergence-of-sgd-on-smooth-non-convex-functions.
[2] Bertsekas, D. P., & Tsitsiklis, J. N. (2000). Gradient convergence in gradient methods with errors. SIAM Journal on Optimization, 10(3), 627-642.
[3] Drori, Y., & Shamir, O. (2020, November). The complexity of finding stationary points with stochastic gradient descent. In International Conference on Machine Learning (pp. 2658-2667). PMLR.
In particular, [1] and [2] show the asymptotic convergence of the last iterate for SGD in nonconvex optimization. [3] shows that for any fixed iterate (e.g., last iterate or k-th iterate) of T iterations of SGD, we can not provide a guarantee for the gradient. These two results do not contradict each other, because [1, 2] are for the asymptotic convergence for a fixed nonconvex problem, while [3] says we cannot provide a non-asymptotic rate for the last-iterate for the class of L-smooth function. The example given in [3] implies that it might be hard to characterize when $\epsilon$-stationary points appear in T iterations for the whole function class.
3. The myths and legends presented on page 7 seem to lack a strong connection with the rest of the paper's content.
Confidence
4: You are confident in your assessment, but not absolutely certain. It is unlikely, but not impossible, that you did not understand some parts of the submission or that you are unfamiliar with some pieces of related work.