>1. In the proof for Theorem 3, equations (5) and (6) utilize Lemma 6 to analyze the approximate posterior sampling component MALA with constraint. However, Lemma 6 only holds under exact posterior sampling from $p(\theta)\propto \exp(-\gamma F(\theta))$. Could the authors explain this discrepancy and justify this usage of Lemma 6?
Thank you for bringing up this point. We omitted the analysis regarding the discrepancy between the approximate posterior and the exact posterior for the sake of simplicity. This simplification doesn't compromise the results, as this discrepancy is **dominated** by the error arising from the noise added in the final step of ASAP, as shown in (4). To clarify why this simplification does not impact the established bound in Theorem 3, we present a detailed analysis below.
Take $\Delta=\frac{d G \log(d/\rho)}{2 n^2 \alpha \varepsilon}$ as Table 2. Denote $\tilde{\theta}\sim \tilde{p}$ the output of MALA with constraint, and denote $p^*$ the exact posterior. Since $W_\infty(\tilde{p},p^*)\leq \Delta$, applying Lemma 21, there exist a coupling of $\tilde{p}$ and $p^*$, denoted as $\zeta$, such that $esssup_{(x,y)\in (\Theta\times\Theta, \zeta) }\lVert x-y \rVert_2\leq \Delta$. Take $\theta_{exact}| \tilde{\theta}\sim \zeta(\cdot|\tilde{\theta})$, then we know $\theta_{exact}\sim p^*$.
With the $nG$-Lipschitz continuity of $\mathcal{L}$, this discrepancy is bounded by
$$\mathbb{E} _ {(\tilde{\theta},\theta _ {exact})\sim \zeta}[\mathcal{L}(\tilde{\theta})-\mathcal{L}(\theta _ {exact})]\leq n G \mathbb{E} _ {(\tilde{\theta},\theta_{exact})\sim \zeta}[\lVert\tilde{\theta}-\theta _ {exact}\rVert_2]\leq n G \Delta.$$
This discrepancy is then dominated by the upper bound for $\mathbb{E}[\mathcal{L}(\hat{\theta})-\mathcal{L}(\tilde{
\theta})]$, which is $\frac{\sqrt{2 d}n G \Delta}{\varepsilon}$ as shown in (4).
Therefore, the discrepancy between the approximate posterior and the exact posterior has a negligible impact on the empirical risk bound.
Thanks again for bringing up this point; We will add a more detailed analysis to our upcoming revision.
>2. In proof of Theorem 1, when proving iteration complexity guarantee for convergence of MALA in total variation distance, the authors cited [Dwivedi et al. 2019] and [Ma et al. 2019]. Could the authors cite the specific theorems?
We cited Theorem 1 of [Dwivedi et al. 2019], and Lemma 8 of [Ma et al. 2019], which is in the appendix. Lemma 8 of [Ma et al. 2019] corresponds to Lemma 10 in the Arxiv version.
>3. Could the authors elaborate on the possibility of extending the privacy bound to more general settings, such as general bounded domain (e.g., probability simplex) or more relaxed convex/non-convex/non-smooth loss functions?
Yes, as addressed in the response to qRJd, our results can be extended to non-convex settings by leveraging techniques from [Ma et al. 2019].
We would clarify that our parameter space is not necessarily an $\ell_2$ ball. Rather, We first localize it to an $\ell_2$ ball, and then perform ASAP. With regard to the probability simplex example, we can use a mirror map towards the Euclidean space, perform localized-ASAP on the Euclidean space, and then map the output back to the simplex.
>4. The idea of perturbing distributions with bounded $W_\infty$ distance with noise to strengthen the differential privacy guarantee seems quite similar to the shift reduction lemma in the "privacy amplification by iteration" analysis [Lemma 20, a]. The main difference seems to be that [Lemma 20, a] focuses on Rényi DP guarantees while the authors focus on pure DP and Gaussian DP guarantees. Maybe the authors could add more discussion regarding the non-trivialness of this extension.
Thanks for pointing out this interesting technical connection. As you said, the results are different. They focused on Renyi DP while we stated results for pure DP and Gaussian DP in Theorem 2. The proof techniques are also quite different. We leveraged Lemma 15, a measure-theoretic adaptive composition theorem of privacy profiles (Hockey-Stick divergences or its dual representation — $f$-DP) that we proved in this paper, which allows the exclusion of a measure 0 set. This is a non-trivial technical step towards our relatively clean proof of Theorem 2. In fact, if we apply adaptive composition theorems of RDP, then we get an RDP bound for ASAP right away. On the other hand, it is well-known that RDP bounds does not imply tight $f$-DP bound even for the Gaussian mechanism. Thanks again for your suggestion; we will add the above discussion in our revision.
References:
Feldman, V., Mironov, I., Talwar, K., & Thakurta, A. (2018, October). Privacy amplification by iteration. In 2018 IEEE 59th Annual Symposium on Foundations of Computer Science (FOCS) (pp. 521-532). IEEE.
Ma, Y. A., Chen, Y., Jin, C., Flammarion, N., & Jordan, M. I. (2019). Sampling can be faster than optimization. Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences, 116(42), 20881-20885.