Summary
The paper considers methods to aggregate test statistics from different, independant, sources, in order to construct an aggregated test with hopefully more power. The key contribution of the paper is the study of the minimal treatment effect which can be detected in a standard gaussian noise setting, for which they obtain minimax rates.
These rates exhibit an elbow effect when the number of aggregated statistics (m) is close to the square of the dimension of the signal (d^2), which the authors relate to the use of the signal direction in the test (when $m < d^2$, the standard chi2 test would give near optimal power, while for $m > d^2$, the test statistics must encode directional information if optimal power is to be obtained). These rates bring two insights: First, aggregating one dimensional statistics in a multi dimensional setting comes at a price. Second, there is no single optimal aggregating method.
Strengths
Overall, the paper is well presented and obtains conclusive results in the scope considered, in the form of minimax rates. These rates justify previous empirical insights on aggregated testing strategies, notably the need for different aggregating strategies depending on the number of tests and the dimension of the problem. Methods achieving the rates (up to a log factor) are specified.
As far as I could assess, the mathematical proofs are, up to small typos (see weakness), correct. The presentation of the main results in section 2 can be easily followed (minimax rates in the general case, optimal combination methods then improved minimax rate using coordination between tests).
Weaknesses
The proof in the appendix suffers from some small typos. Notably, I believe that in equation (S.1), the $2\epsilon$ term should be $\epsilon$ (or $\epsilon< \frac{1}{2}\left(\kappa_{1/10} - \kappa_{1/8}\right)$ in the definition of $\epsilon$), while in line 538, the conclusion of Markov's inequality is that $D^c$, not $D$, has mass less than $1/64$.
The methodology used to obtain Figure 1. could be improved. Notably, the Roc Curves for Chi-square combined and Chi-square pooled should not exhibit any randomness, since these two curves can be computed in closed form using the cumulative distribution functions of the chi2 square and non central chi square. If numerical approximations are to be used, it could be possible to obtain curves exhibiting much less noise by increasing the number of repeats and recycling them for all FPR (I could obtain curves exhibiting little to no noise robustly using 10 000 repeats and 100 FDR in less than <2s on my personal computer, so computation time is not an issue).
Moreover, the way the $f_i$ are drawn, using Rademacher random variables, might have an impact on the directional methods. While this might or might not be the case, I would suggest recomputing the curve, drawing a random f uniformly on the sphere.
Questions
Could the methodology be extended beyond the current setting? Notably, is there any natural generalisation in the case where the noise level $\sigma = 1/\sqrt{n}$ can no longer be assumed to be identical ?
Is there any explanation of the results in terms of the distribution of the p-values under the alternative hypothesis? If so, is there any insight on the best way to aggregate a given set of statistics (instead of considering the best way to aggregate the best statistics for a given m, d)?
Rating
6: Weak Accept: Technically solid, moderate-to-high impact paper, with no major concerns with respect to evaluation, resources, reproducibility, ethical considerations.
Confidence
4: You are confident in your assessment, but not absolutely certain. It is unlikely, but not impossible, that you did not understand some parts of the submission or that you are unfamiliar with some pieces of related work.
Limitations
The paper derives optimal test aggregation strategies in the context of gaussian noised signals. A first limitation of the paper is that it is assumed that the sample size $n$ considered in each collected test is identical. This can barely be expected in practice, and as such, insight about the impact of uneven tests would be welcome (i.e., does $mn$ translate into $\sum_{i=1}^m n_i$?, or rather $m \min(n_i)$?). This issue is not mentionned in the paper.
Another limitation not mentionned is the fact that, in practice, the test statistics obtained from independent trials are not chosen, but set, and as such, Stouffer's method, which attain the minimax rates when $m>d^2$, is not implementable. In most settings where it could be implemented, the whole $X_i$ information would be known, and therefore the dimension reduction issue would not occur. For this reason, the best rate achievable with realistic one dimensional statistics is of particular interest. Unfortunatly, this is left to the appendix, in Theorem 4.