Response to the AC
We thank the reviewers for their feedback and the AC in advance for their meta-review.
We also thank the reviewers for identifying our paper’s strengths:
- **edNc**: comprehensive and carefully designed experiments, very interesting research problem, and meaningful findings.
- **uLs2**: comprehensive analysis of instruction-tuning, using many LLMs from multiple model families.
- **hcZZ**: interesting finding that brain alignment correlates better with world knowledge than reasoning.
- **xjE7**: interesting to read, contributes knowledge to HCI and LLM-human alignment, and the task/setting is relatively novel.
We summarize each reviewer’s suggestions/concerns and our responses:
**Reviewer edNc**:
- Suggested we discuss more insights to build brain-/human-intelligence-aligned LLMs. In our paper, we will add a subsection discussing papers with insights on LLM and human cognition and how to build brain-aligned LLMs. (References [1-7] in our rebuttal).
- Suggested we study connections between brain alignment and training data. We explain that we instruction-tuned LLaMA-7B and an ablated version, and how that provides preliminary insights.
- Suggested we test reasoning-specific models (e.g., Math). We explain that reasoning-specific models may not be appropriate as we limit our scope to the human language system and use datasets where participants read/listened to English text.
**Reviewer uLs2**:
- Noted that two figures in our paper could be clearer. We remove model names and adapt point sizes to model sizes for better readability. We provide larger figure versions with model names in the Appendix.
- Suggested we test additional models, e.g., LLaMA2, Mistral. We explain we prioritized models with diverse model architectures and families (LLaMA, T5, GPT-2). Regardless, in our rebuttal, we show results for LLaMA2 and Gemma models, yielding similar results to our paper’s conclusion.
- Suggested we study the effect of RLHF. We explain that we studied only one RLHF model, which is insufficient to draw rigorous conclusions. Our paper’s focus is instruction-tuning, for which we provide comprehensive results.
- Asked about the effect of word length on our behavioral alignment method. We explain that we follow prior works in implicitly accounting for word length by computing the surprisal of a word with multiple tokens as the sum of surprisals of each token. Importantly, we use consistent tokenizers when comparing each vanilla LLM to its instruction-tuned version, thus controlling for the effect of word length.
- Suggested we run other brain alignment methods (e.g., RSA) aside from Brain-Score linear predictivity. In our rebuttal, we add preliminary results for RSA and CKA, showing they are similar to linear predictivity. We focused on linear predictivity following prior works, but will add more comprehensive RSA and CKA results to our paper.
**Reviewer hcZZ**:
- Concerned that our paper has no new methodology. We cite the COLM review guide in explaining that developing new methods is only one of many forms of scientific contribution; our analysis of instruction-tuning and LLM world knowledge contributes new insights to the field.
- Implied that since LLM performance is correlated to brain alignment (shown in prior work), it is expected that instruction-tuning improves brain alignment since it improves LLM performance. We explain why we are not confident in this generalization. (a) Prior works evaluate LLM performance using next-word prediction, whereas we study reasoning and world knowledge. (b) Contrary to the reviewer’s point, prior work showed that finetuning may result in no change or decreased brain alignment depending on the finetuning task and brain region.
**Reviewer xjE7**:
- Asked about the weakly positive correlations in our brain alignment results. We explain that some of our LLMs actually obtain brain alignment close to the fMRI “noise ceiling” (further explained in our rebuttal and paper), suggesting they align nearly all useful signals from fMRI data. We follow prior works in computing the noise ceiling.
- Claimed that our study is not a causal analysis. We explain how our experiments showing that instruction-tuning improves brain alignment are, in fact, a causal analysis.
- Noted a related work (reference [1] in their review) on instruction-tuning. We explain that our study is complementary to [1], with many key differences in datasets and methods. We will discuss this related work in our paper.
- Suggested our behavioral alignment method should not be used, and yields different conclusions from [1]. We explain that our behavioral alignment method is commonly used in the literature. Also, it actually yields a similar conclusion to [1]: improving LLM performance does not enhance alignment with human reading behavior.
We will add these clarifications to improve our paper. Thank you again!
-Authors