We are most grateful for the constructive comments from the reviewer on our manuscript. For the weakness part, we would like to clarify the questions the reviewer commented on in a point-to-point fashion.
1. Figure 2 illustrates a detailed visualization of confidence intervals to show how bias and variance for different designs change when interference gamma increases. We use n = 60 as an illustration example. Table 2 provides more comparisons of different designs on distinct random graphs when interference is fixed, hence we let n = {100, 200, 400} to introduce diversity.
2. We add the simulation results of graph cluster randomization to the revised manuscript in Figure 2.
3. Graph clustering is same as the randomized saturation design except that the user needs to cluster the units when no clear cut-offs exist. We use multi-level modularity optimization(Blondel, Vincent D., et al, 2008) for the clustering. Since there is no clear cluster boundary in the network, graph clustering is inferior to the independent set design due to significant bias.To better illustrate the performance of graph clustering, we add the simulation results of graph cluster randomization to the revised manuscript.
4. Some of the designs listed in Table 1 are widely used designs, which were not necessarily designed for the causal inference over a well-connected interference network. The performance of other designs in Table 1 are obviously inferior to our approach. That is why only a few methods are compared for demonstration purpose. Additional results of comparison with other designs in Table 1 have included in the revised manuscript, include ego-clusters and graph cluster (similar to randomized saturation).
5. Thm 1 from Section 4.2 provides a lower bound for the size of the independent set, which suffices to show its superiority over other methods. In the simulation part, the variance roughly scales as 1/n, which is much better than the lower bound provided in Section 4.2.
6. The variance scales as 1/n_I from the theoretical perspective.
7. in 5.2 we let \rho = 0 when estimating ATE(the average direct effects)
8. For the nomenclature question, yes, they can be considered as the direct effect and the total effect.
9. In practice, any sub-sample/separation design involves the representativeness issue on a fixed sample dataset. On the one hand, the first step in the greedy algorithm involves a random choice of the first vertex. Every vertex has a positive probability of being selected to the independent set. The bias from the greedy algorithm is alleviated by the stochastic algorithm, similar to previous work, such as Saint-Jacqueset al., 2019; Uganderetal.,2013. On the other hand, we are aiming to estimate the population causal effect instead of the sample averaged causal effect. A bias in the representativeness of the independent set to the sample set is mitigated by considering the super-population perspective, where, under repeated experiments, the network and the potential outcome are randomly drawn from the population. Therefore, the estimator is unbiased for the populational causal effect in the super-population framework (instead of the unbiasedness for sample average effect).
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