Summary
This submission proposed to use quantum approximate optimization algorithm (QAOA) to compute the maximum likelihood estimator in the statistical estimation problem of the spiked tensor model.
Using the overlap between the estimated vector and the original vector, the author(s) obtained rigorous analysis for the so-called weak recovery threshold for 1-step QAOA. Namely, above such a threshold, the overlap will be non-zero with non-trivial probability; otherwise, the overlap will vanish with high probability. The author(s) also showed that the established weak recovery threshold matches the 1-step tensor power iteration classical algorithm.
For the p-step QAOA, the author(s) also obtained the weak recovery threshold based on some heuristic argument, which also matches that of the p-step tensor power iteration algorithm. Numerical experiments show that the QAOA method could achieve the state of the art threshold by combining with tensor unfolding (a technique used in the state of the art algorithm).
As far as I know, the submission proposed a new technical analysis for QAOA (by showing that the overlap exhibits an asymptotic sine-Gaussian distribution), providing a rigorous study of the polynomial-time QAOA.
As such, I believe the work is worth sharing to the community. Hence, I recommend accept.
(I did not have enough time to check all the derivations provided in appendices in details, but the overall proof ideal seems logical to me.)
Strengths
1. Rigorous analysis for the 1-step QAOA, rigorous analysis for the p-step tensor power iteration, and detailed comparison between the two algorithms.
2. Discovering an intriguing sine-Gaussian law also verified through numerical simulations.
3. The manuscript is well written and explained.
Weaknesses
1. The asymptotic analysis requires the number of qubits n approaching infinity, which is practically demanding.
2. The analysis of the p-step QAOA is based on an heuristic calculation.
3. It is not known if QAOA could achieve the same threshold as in the state of the art classical algorithm.
Numerical experiments do provide some potentials of matching the result. Whether there is a quantum advantage remains unclear.
Questions
1. In Remark 3.10, the author(s) claimed that for certain parameter p, the QAOA has a constant factor advantage over the classical power iteration algorithm in the overlap achieved.
The overlap via the p-step tensor is proved in Proposition 3.9. However, the overlap via QAOA given in (3.12) is based on heuristic calculations.
Hence, I'm not sure such an advantage is rigorous. If I did not misunderstand anything, the wording of claiming the constant factor advantage needs to be modified.
2. In Discussion, the author(s) asserted that "This implies that achieving a strong quantum advantage via the QAOA requires using a number of steps p that grows with n."
I understand that multiple (possibly infinite many) steps is needed to achieve a better performance for QAOA.
However, it is still not analytically evident if QAOA can match the state of the art threshold, because a heuristic calculation is required in the analysis.
Hence, whether there is a rigorous advantage for QAOA still remains unclear to me, even p approaching infinity.
3. As above, even if author(s) can rigorously show that p-step QAOA outperforms the p-step tensor power iteration, it probably not accurate to call it a "modest quantum advantage", since the p-step tensor power iteration is not the state of the art algorithm.
I highly recommend the author(s) to be more careful about the phrasing of quantum advantage throughout the paper.
Limitations
The limitations are addressed in the manuscript. I also summarized them in Weaknesses.
Yet, since this submission is a theory work, I think the practical limitation is not a big concern.