Questions
The BFGS method is a classical quasi-Newton method proposed in 1970 and its explicit local superlinear convergence rate has been established until 2021. However, the global convergence of BFGS is an interesting problem which has not been well addressed before. For example, applying traditional analysis of Armijo-Wolfe line search on BFGS to guarantee the global convergence cannot achieve the explicit local superlinear rates.
This paper provides both global and local convergence rates of BFGS methods with inexact line search, matching the rates of gradient descent and BFGS under the first-order and second-order Lipschitz assumptions. Both of these results are reasonable, and the theoretical analysis based on the function $\Phi(A)={\rm Tr}(A)-d-\log\det(A)$ make sense. I believe the theoretical contribution of this paper is valuable to the community of machine learning and optimization.
I have some minor questions/comments:
1. Unifying the global and local convergence rates into one framework of BFGS with line search is nice. We can also address this problem by a simple way, i.e., run (accelerated) gradient descent to enter the local region, then run standard BFGS to achieve the superlinear rate. Can you compare the results in your paper with this heuristic method?
2. Can you provide some result for $B_0=\alpha I$ with $\alpha\in(\mu,L)$ as the extension of Corollary 6.5?
3. The discussion on the initial Hessian estimator after Corollary 6.5 is interesting. It is better to provide some experiments to validate it. Considering the theoretical contribution of this paper is strong, I will still recommend accept even if there is no additional experiment in rebuttal.
4. The following recent work for the explicit superlinear convergence rates of quasi-Newton methods should be involved into the literature review:
[A] Zhuanghua Liu, Luo Luo, Bryan Kian Hsiang Low. Incremental quasi-Newton methods with faster superlinear convergence rates. AAAI 2024.
[B] Aakash Lahoti, Spandan Senapati, Ketan Rajawat, Alec Koppel. Sharpened lazy incremental quasi-Newton method. arXiv:2305.17283.
[C] Chengchang Liu, Cheng Chen, Luo Luo. Symmetric rank-k methods. arXiv:2303.16188, 2023.
[D] Chengchang Liu, Cheng Chen, Luo Luo, John C.S. Lui. Block Broyden's methods for solving nonlinear equations. NeurIPS 2023.
[E] Chengchang Liu, Luo Luo. Quasi-Newton methods for saddle point problems. NeurIPS 2022.
[F] Chengchang Liu, Shuxian Bi, Luo Luo, John C.S. Lui. Partial-quasi-Newton methods: efficient algorithms for minimax optimization problems with unbalanced dimensionality. KDD 2022.
[G] Haishan Ye, Dachao Lin, Zhihua Zhang. Greedy and random Broyden's methods with explicit superlinear convergence rates in nonlinear equations. arXiv:2110.08572
[H] Dachao Lin, Haishan Ye, Zhihua Zhang. Explicit superlinear convergence rates of Broyden's methods in nonlinear equations. arXiv:2109.01974
5. In line 49, it is somewhat inappropriate to call reference [40] a draft. It is more appropriate to use "unpublished paper" or "technical report" to describe it.