Weaknesses
The main weakness of this paper is that the question posed in the Introduction has already been addressed in the existing literature. The prior works have already proposed minimax optimal subspace estimators that attain tighter bounds than the one derived in this paper. Moreover, the required signal-to-noise condition in this paper is also more stringent than those in the prior works.
In [1,2,3], the authors proposed left singular subspace estimators of a matrix $A\in\mathbb{R}^{d_1\times d_2}$, which achieve the statistically optimal estimation bounds (in both spectral norm and $({2,\infty})$ bound) that only depend on $d_1$ when the noise variance $\sigma^2$ is small. In addition, it has been shown that when $\sigma^2$ is large, it is information-theoretically impossible to obtain an estimation bound that is independent of $d_2$.
By transposing the target matrix and converting an $({2,\infty})$ bound to a Frobiuns bound (multiplying by $\sqrt{d}$), the estimation guarantee for the right singular subspace in terms of the Frobenius norm follows directly from these prior results. Further, the signal-to-noise ratio condition in this paper $\sqrt{T}/(\sigma_1-\sigma_{i+1}) = \tilde{O}(1/\sqrt{m})$ (Assumption 2.1) is much stringent than the conditions required in these existing works ($\sqrt{T}/(\sigma_1-\sigma_{i+1}) = \tilde{O}(1/\sqrt{d} \wedge 1/(md)^{1/4})$). Moreover, the estimation guarantees in the prior work are established in high probability while this paper only establishes it in expectation.
In short, under less stringent signal-to-noise ratio conditions, prior works have already achieved statistically better bounds (which are indeed minimax optimal up to log factors) for the singular subspace than the bound obtained in this paper.
Therefore, the intellectual contribution of this paper is limited. Given the estimation error in the existing works is already minimax optimal and the required SNR condition therein is shown to be necessary to ensure consistent estimation, one approach to improve the contribution might be removing the log factors in the error bounds.
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[2] "Inference for heteroskedastic PCA with missing data," Annals of Statistics, 729-756, 2024
[3] "Deflated HeteroPCA: Overcoming the Curse of Ill-Conditioning in Heteroskedastic PCA," Annals of Statistics, to appear