Summary
For weighted distance graphs, the metric backbone corresponds to the union of the shortest paths. This work shows that the community structure of a graph can still be detected from this backbone. This is surprising, since inter-community edges often serve as bridges between communities, so one would expect them to be overrepresented in the metric backbone.
Experiments are performed to demonstrate this behavior on real-world networks.
Strengths
The paper is well-written and easy to read.
The problem is interesting and the described theoretical behavior is surprising.
The overview given in Section 3.2 is helpful.
Weaknesses
The experimental setup in Section 4 seems somewhat overcomplicated. Is this a standard method for converting weighted networks to distance networks? If so, refer to works where this methodology is studied.
Also, it is worth pointing out that if the proximity graph is generated from some weighted SBM, then this distance-conversion will introduce dependencies between the edge weights.
Similarly, the setup of Section 5 is also quite complicated without providing much motivation or justification. The obvious way of converting points to a distance network would be to consider the complete graph with weights corresponding to the Euclidean distance, but I understand that then every edge belongs to the metric backbone. Please explain why this complicated construction is needed.
Also, the label placement of Figure 2a is a bit inconvenient as it blocks the blue line.
Moreover, while the results of Section 4 are interesting, the results of Section 5 are not convincing.
Minor comments:
* In the denominator of $p(u,v)$ given below line 251, you write $u\in\text{Nei}(u)\wedge\dots$ instead of $u\in\text{Nei}(u)\wedge\dots$.
Questions
In line 132, you write "Or as the uniform distribution", but this seems like an odd and unnecessary statement. It makes sense that you want to point out the resemblance to the exponential distribution for taking minima, but it's unclear how the resemblance to the uniform is necessary.
At first, I was a bit confused with the fact that the inequalities given in Proposition 2.1 do not depend on a or b. Perhaps you could comment on that in the text. For example, you could comment on the fact that there will always be pairs whose distances fall below this interval, but that their fraction vanishes, and that one expects intra-community distances to be smaller.
Limitations
The authors have addressed the limitations of the results.