Summary
In this paper, the authors endeavor to integrate the concepts of mirror descent (MD) and preconditioned gradient descent (PGD) within the framework of Wasserstein distances, from a convergence theory perspective. Initially, they provide a comprehensive background including, but not limited to, Wasserstein distances, Bregman divergence, convexity, and smoothness. With assumptions regarding $\beta$-smoothness and $\alpha$-convexity, they successfully demonstrate the iterative procedures for MD and PGD in the Wasserstein space. Subsequently, they conduct experiments focusing on sampling methodologies and single-cell dynamics.
Strengths
1. **Solid Mathematical Foundations:** The authors offer a rigorous mathematical derivation concerning the convergence behaviors of MD and PGD, supplemented by a thorough analysis of the theoretical background.
2. **Relevance to Conference Themes:** The paper presents fundamental theoretical analysis that is highly pertinent to the themes of the conference.
3. **Comprehensive Background Introduction:** The supplementary materials provide an extensive overview necessary to understand the nuances of the paper. The foundational work done by the authors is commendable.
Weaknesses
1. **Results Presentation:** The presentation of results could be enhanced by providing more detailed visualizations. For instance, it would be beneficial to include a snapshot illustrating particle evolution for Figure 1, right $K_2$. Additionally, if the authors have access to MATLAB, it is recommended to utilize the `surf` function for the contour of Dirichlet distribution's pdf in Figure 4 to better demonstrate the sampling tasks.
2. **Clarification of Definitions:** It is recommended that the authors include explicit definitions of convergence and global convergence to preclude any potential misunderstandings in the appendix.
3. **Visualization of Convergence Data:** I suggest employing seaborn's `sns.lineplot` with a shaded area to depict the error bars, which would support the assertions made in checklist item 7 more robustly.
4. **Overlooked References:** It appears that significant references relevant to discussions on the convergence of mirror descent may have been overlooked. I recommend incorporating additional reference [1] that provides pertinent insights into these discussions.
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References:
[1]. Tzen, Belinda, et al. "Variational principles for mirror descent and mirror langevin dynamics." IEEE Control Systems Letters 7 (2023): 1542-1547.
Questions
1. **About the Proof of Convergence:**
From the perspective of gradient flow, assuming we have a velocity field $\dot{X} = v_t$, we can derive that $v_t = -\Vert \nabla\frac{\delta \mathcal{F}}{\mu} \Vert_2^2$. In this context, does assuming $\beta$-smoothness offer additional advantages beyond the conventional benefits?
2. **Alternative Proof Approaches:**
Could the convergence location and rate be established from the perspective of a Lyapunov functional? This approach may provide a robust framework for proving stability and convergence.
3. **Riemannian-based Approaches:**
Is it feasible to extend the proposed method to Riemannian-based approaches, such as Riemannian SVGD [1]?
4. **About Higher Order Systems and Extensions:**
Is it possible to extend this approach to systems characterized by the Fisher-Rao metric [2]? Furthermore, considering that the continuity equation in Wasserstein space represents a first-order system, could this approach be adapted to Hamiltonian Flow [3], which is the second order system to my knowledge?
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### References
[1]. Zhang, Ruqi, Qiang Liu, and Xin Tong. "Sampling in constrained domains with orthogonal-space variational gradient descent." Advances in Neural Information Processing Systems 35 (2022): 37108-37120.
[2]. Neklyudov, Kirill, et al. "Wasserstein Quantum Monte Carlo: A Novel Approach for Solving the Quantum Many-Body Schrödinger Equation." Advances in Neural Information Processing Systems 36 (2024).
[3]. Ambrosio, Luigi, and Wilfrid Gangbo. "Hamiltonian ODEs in the Wasserstein Space of Probability Measures." Communications on Pure and Applied Mathematics: A Journal Issued by the Courant Institute of Mathematical Sciences 61.1 (2008): 18-53.
Limitations
I appreciate the efforts of the authors. Nevertheless, I recommend that the authors include a dedicated section in the appendix detailing the assumptions such as convexity and smoothness within functionals. This addition would significantly aid in understanding and following the methodologies employed in this work.