Summary
The paper consider the problem of optimizing second-order smooth and strongly convex functions where the algorithm is only accessible to noisy evaluations of the objective function it queries. Authors provide the first tight characterization for the rate of the minimax simple regret by developing matching upper and lower bounds. They propose an algorithm that features a combination of a bootstrapping stage and a mirror-descent stage.
Strengths
The authors consider a problem formulation where the gradient of the function or higher order derivatives are not available. This problem formulation is of extreme interest in the field of Machine Learning. However, the work has many weaknesses (see below).
Weaknesses
1. Almost no mention is made of work motivation. This is an important part that **cannot be missed**...
2. Also, this paper gives the impression that **it was produced clearly not in this year**, since the main references are **from 2021** and earlier. But since 2021, the research, in particular in the area of zero-order optimization has a lot of interest in the community and is highly advanced compared to what the authors cited as related works. For example, in addition to a number of cited papers studying the zero-order optimization problem with the assumption of increased smoothness of the function, there is already a more recent paper that has been missed: _Akhavan et al. (2023)_ [1], which proposes an improved analysis of gradient approximation bias estimation as well as second moment estimation. Similarly, there is a weakly described section presenting different gradient approximations, where the main focus fell on the smoothing vector (Gaussian vector or Randomized vector). But, there are already a number of papers, such as _Gasnikov et al. (2024)_ [2], which have shown that the randomized approximation clearly performs better on practical experiments than the Gaussian approximation. It seems better to give an overview of different gradient approximations, including $l_1$ randomization, in this section
3. Since I have already mentioned the topic of practical experiments, it is important to note that despite the fact that the authors provide mainly theoretical work, a paper that is intended for presentation at the NeurIPS conference should **show the effectiveness of the proposed results** in real life. This paper lacks any experiments, which is a major weakness of the paper.
4. The structure of the article is poorly chosen... It seems that the sections "Main contribution", "Discussion" and "Conclusion" would **have improved the presentation** of the article's results.
5. Regarding the results themselves, essentially **only one result is presented**, which is a minor contribution. It would be interesting to consider when the function is not only twice differentiable but also has a higher order of smoothness, as well as other settings of the problem: convex, non-convex, maybe the Polyak–Lojasiewicz condition, etc.
[1] Akhavan A. et al. (2023). Gradient-free optimization of highly smooth functions: improved analysis and a new algorithm //arXiv preprint arXiv:2306.02159.
[2] Gasnikov, A. et al. (2024). Highly smooth zeroth-order methods for solving optimization problems under the PL condition. Computational Mathematics and Mathematical Physics.
Questions
I have a few questions and suggestions:
- It seems that Theorem 3.1 can be improved in terms of dependence on the problem dimension $d$ using tricks from the work of _Akhavan et al. (2023)_ [1]
- Can the authors explain what the final result would look like if $w_t$ does not necessarily have zero mean, but is independent of vector $e$ (randomization on the sphere)? Also, if we consider deterministic noise $|\delta(x)| \leq \Delta$ as noise.
[1] Akhavan A. et al. (2023). Gradient-free optimization of highly smooth functions: improved analysis and a new algorithm //arXiv preprint arXiv:2306.02159.