Strengths
Confidence sequences and bandit algorithms for GLMs are a hot topic, and the authors contribution to that topic is solid, both because of the strength of the result itself, and because the proof itself is very simple and easy to verify---something that cannot be said about some of the previous work on the topic.
Weaknesses
The paper is written in a style that might be described as "being written for the reviewers". It contains misleading and inaccurate claims which are meant to, presumably, impress the reader with the quality of the results. I give some examples shortly. Its unfortunate, because the ideas in the paper are good, and if only the authors had simply written about their work in a neutral, descriptive manner, I would absolutely recommend that the paper is accepted. However, I do not believe the overclaiming to be some sort of an accident---which if it were, the authors might fix upon my pointing it out---and so without any system for "revise and resubmit", must recommend rejection.
Some examples of problematic claims (emphasis mine in all quotes):
1) Lines 1-2, the authors claim that "[...] for any generalised linear models (GLMs) that is guaranteed to be convex and numerically tight". To my understanding, the authors have no guarantee that their result is numerically tight for every GLM, and thus the first sentence of the abstract is false (is there even a guarantee in the paper that there exists a single GLM for which it is numerically tight?).
2) Line 53, "Our main novely lies in __cleverly__ using [...]"; whether the approach is clever or not is perhaps something for readers to judge, not for the authors to proclaim.
3) Line 107, "we completely remove the poly(S)-dependency from the radius, resolving one of the __open problems__ posited by Lee et al. (__2024__)." An open problem is an well-known unsolved problem in a field (that is, a problem that numerous other researchers have attempted and failed to solve). Your "open problem" is not that. Rather, it is a single sentence in the middle of a paper published at a conference that took place less than 3 weeks before this paper was submitted that simply states that the authors leave it for future work.
4) Line 111-112 authors claim that "perhaps more importantly, [ellipsoidal confidence sequences allow] one to equivalently rewrite the optimistic optimization in the UCB algorithm as a closed-form bonus-based UCB algorithm". Is this true? The claim appears to be that, if $\mathcal{X}$ is a subset of the unit ball and $\Theta$ is an ellipsoid, then the quantity $b(\Theta) = \\max_{x \in \mathcal{X}} \max_{\theta \in \Theta} \langle x, \theta \rangle$ has a closed form expression. Could the authors state the closed form expression they have in mind for, say, $\mathcal{X}$ being an irregular polytope with $2^d$-many vertices? And if the resulting expression requires $O(2^d)$ time to evaluate... then the statement is trivial, and ellipsoidal form of the confidence sequences is unimportant. (and of course, fit a spline to those 2^d vertices, and now you cannot even write the solution as a sum over the vertices!).
5) Lines 307-308: in the conclusion, the authors state that "[their algorithm] is numerically verified to be the best performing algorithm." The authors compared against __one baseline__ on a __single experiment__ varying only __one experimental parameter__ between __two values__, and the experiment was __two dimensional__. *Really?*
Other than that, section 3.3 seems like it could contain interesting insight, but I'm worried that the way it is written, the only persons that might be able to understand it are either the authors themselves, or someone that has spent just as much time poring over the paper as the authors have done. I would suggest that the authors either expand on it and explain it better, or cut it.
Some minor typos:
- Line 312-313 you talk of "Bayesian randomized (exploration) algorithms for GLM bandits", but then cite 5 papers for these algorithms, out of which the four I am familiar with are frequentist algorithms, not Bayesian.
- Line 95-97, second half of sentence seems to be missing
- Line 129, the definition looks like the likelihood ratio, not the log-likelihood ratio as claimed
- Theorem 3.2, second line
- Line 82, the set in probability is wrong
- Line 75 rewards should be in filtration