Summary
The paper studies malicious knowledge editing in LLMs as a safety threat. In particular, it considers misinformation and bias. It finds both threats are very possible. Furthermore, commonsense misinformation is easier to inject than "long-tail" misinformation, i.e. highly domain-specialized misinfo. Bias injection can generalize to an overall biased model. And the paper finds evidence that these attacks can be hard to detect. Finally, the paper contributes a new dataset that can be used to study these types of attacks.
Strengths
Important problem that may become even more salient as we increasingly rely on LLMs.
New dataset seems valuable to future research in this area.
While not too surprising (see below), the conclusions remain important.
Weaknesses
My main concerns are with the writing and positioning of the paper. In particular:
The paper claims to "reformulate knowledge editing as a new type of threats for LLMs" (line 117-119, again 468-469). But this does not seem to be a new idea. I'm not an expert in knowledge editing, so please correct me if I'm mistaken, but my cursory search found a survey https://arxiv.org/pdf/2310.16218 that highlighted "if KME is maliciously applied to inject harmful knowledge into language models, the edited models can be easily transformed into tools for misinformation". https://arxiv.org/abs/2407.07791 seems to test this in a simulated setting. Similarly, https://arxiv.org/abs/2312.14302 and https://arxiv.org/abs/2408.02946 showed bias could be introduced and generalize beyond the training set, albeit with more geenric fine-tuning than knowledge editing. Furthermore, I'm also not sure about defining "its two emerging major risks" (line 119) as just misinformation injection and bias injection. For example, https://arxiv.org/pdf/2403.13355 suggests that backdoors could also be a knowledge editing threat. In general, it may be an overclaim that the problem framing is novel and comprehensive. Similarly, the "feasibility of disseminating misinformation" (line 123-124) already seems to have been demonstrated, and the "misuse risk of knowledge editing techniques" (line 122-123) in general. Significantly more precision seems needed to better highlight the contributions here vs what already exists in the literature, and avoid possibly substantial overclaims.
The extensive, ubiquitous usage of different formatting elements - bold, italics, etc. - with paragraphs containing text in as many as 4 styles, makes it harder to read. Suggest being much more judicious about what's really key to highlight.
Lines 461.5 to 465 seem redundant (those examples have already been explained), would cut.
Table 1 reports final numbers and the "performance increase", while table 2 reports original number, final number, and performance increase. The inconsistency seems a bit odd, and also the table isn't quite aligned in some places.
Questions
In the evaluation, I was a bit unclear on what is actually calculating the scores - is it an LLM judging the responses or something else? Maybe worth a line in paper.
It seems the misinformation injection threat model is focused on a malicious actor doing it intentionally (line 50). If it's intentional, maybe calling it "disinformation injection" would be more appropriate (disinformation = intentional misinformation)? Could these threat models be a concern unintentionally?
Could you detect bias-edited model by doing a generic/standard bias eval? Especially if it makes the model generally biased and not narrowly so?