Strengths
S1) Easy to follow, written clearly.
S2) Good idea and important concepts that are used
S3) Good reasoning and background information behind the choices (for experiments as well as design-choices in the algorithm development)
Weaknesses
W1) Experiments are not sufficient.
a) Even though Fowlkes Mallows is a good evaluation measure, state-of-the-art papers for clustering usually include the NMI and ARI values, so please include at least one of them additionally in the appendix.
b) Presentation of the experiments is hard to follow: In the main paper, only the average over all datasets is given, which is not enough to get an idea where the algorithm is good and where not. Instead of comparing AuToMATo with competitors individually, please give an overview of all methods, but for the individual datasets.
c) Please provide an overview of the properties of the datasets. Which dimensionality, which size?
d) Regarding Figure 2 : The worst clustering result that DBSCAN returns is completely irrelevant, leave it away. You can always find an epsilon or minpts such that all points are clustered together into one cluster.
e) Include an evaluation of noise/outlier labels given by your method or exclude it from the paper entirely.
f) Do not set a seed for the experiments. That hinders evaluation of robustness.
g) In line 440 you write DBSCAN "sometimes" outperforms AuToMATo, even though it does so for around a third of the datasets. Plus, the range of epsilon values is not chosen according to best practices (see, e.g., Schubert, E., Sander, J., Ester, M., Kriegel, H. P., & Xu, X. (2017). DBSCAN revisited, revisited: why and how you should (still) use DBSCAN. ACM Transactions on Database Systems (TODS), 42(3), 1-21.)
W2) Lack of novelty and discussion. Even though the method has some promising ideas, it is very similar to HDBSCAN and Density Peaks without discussing the differences enough or showing where exactly they make a difference in practice. Synthetic datasets could help to show these differences. Furthermore, AuToMATo does not significantly outperform any of the competitors. Please elaborate for which type of datasets one should use AuToMATo over existing methods.
W3) The related work section is missing. Please add additionally to the background about ToMATo in Section 2 also background about other related methods. Elaborate on similarities, e.g., your concept of persistence is very similar to the stability used in HDBSCAN and the hill climbing approach is similar to density-peaks.
W4) Presentation: Increase font size for Fig.2 . Instead of listing all the Tables in the appendix, make a visual overview where readers can compare all your competitors for the different datasets.
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