Weaknesses
__Missing literature review__
The paper most closely related to this work is [Machine Learning Estimation of Heterogeneous Treatment Effects with Instruments[(https://proceedings.neurips.cc/paper/2019/file/3b2acfe2e38102074656ed938abf4ac3-Paper.pdf). It develops a fast-converging CATE estimator for local average treatment effects using instrumental variables. However, this paper is not cited in the literature review. Please consider including a discussion of this paper for richer context. More importantly, please compare your work with this paper to highlight the novelty of the current work.
__Weak motivation on directed learning__
The introduction section lacks plausible reasons for proposing directed learning. What are the alternative methods and their pros and cons? Why should we specifically consider the directed learning approach?
__Validity of Assumption 2__
Assumption 2f is a weaker version of the following assumption: "$U$ is noninformative to $A$ given $Z$ and $X$ (i.e., $A \perp U \mid X,Z$)." Given that there are no practical settings where Assumption 2f holds while $A \perp U \mid X,Z$ doesn't (except some peculiar parametrization), and both assumptions are non-testable, I don't see any practical distinction between $A \perp U \mid X,Z$ and Assumption 2f. In other words, Assumption 2f is just another representation of $A \perp U \mid X,Z$ tailored for identification.
Combining $A \perp U \mid X,Z$ with Assumption 2c ($Z \perp U \mid X$) results in $(U \perp A \cup Z \mid X)$ by the contraction property of conditional independence. This means $U$ does not influence $(A,Z)$ given $X$. Consequently, in any related causal graph, there should be no edges from $U$ to $A$. This leads to the ignorability condition that $Y(a) \perp A \mid X$.
In summary, interpreting Assumption 2f as $A \perp U \mid X,Z$ means Assumption 2 is essentially an ignitability assumption. Therefore, it is important to discuss the validity of Assumption 2 in practical settings, to disprove that Assumption 2f is merely another representation of $A \perp U \mid X,Z$ designed for identification. Have you considered the LATE setting, given that the estimand in Proposition 1 will remain unchanged?
__More analysis is required__
Multiple robustness properties provided in Theorem 3 imply that the proposed estimator converges to the optimal estimator faster. For example, if nuisances converge at an $n^{-1/4}$ rate, where $n$ is the number of samples, then the estimator converges at an $n^{-1/2}$ rate. These results are beneficial since they guarantee fast convergence. While Theorem 3 is attractive, it is somewhat impractical because, in practice, the working model is rarely considered a true model. Please provide more analysis on the rate of convergence concerning the convergence rate of nuisance parameters.
__Fair comparison with other estimators__
Even if the empirical evidence in Table 1 is strong, the discussion on why the proposed estimator converges faster than other multiply-robust estimators, such as MRIV, is missing. Asymptotically, there are no reasons to believe the proposed estimator converges faster than the MRIV estimator. Can you provide a discussion on why the proposed estimator converges faster than its competitors?