Response to Reviewer 3TVK
We thank Reviewer 3TVK for the constructive feedback and acknowledgment. We hope to address all comments below and will add the new experiments to the Experiments section of the paper.
**Retaining fine-grained relationships in shorter contexts.** Based on prior works (e.g. Llama 3, Gemma) and our empirical results, we believe that there is no evidence that switching from absolute to relative positional encodings poses a challenge in dealing with shorter contexts. Table 2 of the paper shows that TULIP not only retained the original performance of CLIP but even improved it by 6.1% R@1 on image-to-text retrieval and 10.7% R@1 on text-to-image retrieval on COCO. Similarly, we observed 8.2% R@1 on image-to-text retrieval and 13.6% R@1 on text-to-image retrieval on the Flickr dataset.
**Details about human annotators.** The Long-DCI benchmark is derived from the dataset introduced in the paper “A Picture is Worth More Than 77 Text Tokens: Evaluating CLIP-Style Models on Dense Captions”, by Urbanek et al. (CVPR 2024). All human annotations were provided in this dataset, by using Mephisto (Urbanek and Ringshia, 2023) to host the task and pay crowdworkers to annotate the images, as detailed in Section 3.2 of their paper. Unlike their work, which uses only captions truncated to 77 tokens, we leverage their full annotations to construct a long-caption retrieval benchmark.
**Qualitative comparison for short context.** To compare our TULIP model to CLIP, we perform a new qualitative analysis for short caption retrieval and present the results in the Appendix (Figures 12 and 13). We observe that our TULIP can also capture fine-grained details in short captions, such as object numeracy, relationships, attributes, etc. This is attributed to using relative positional encodings, which model pairwise token relationships unlike absolute ones, improving its understanding of complex details even in shorter contexts. Note that in the figure, the misclassified concepts are marked in red and the correct ones are in green.
**Discussion on perceptual understanding and compositionality.** Indeed CLIP has challenges in perceptual understanding such as spatial understanding, numeracy, and compositionality of objects and attributes. To better evaluate TULIP's capabilities in these areas—specifically in handling compositionality in text inputs—we considered the two benchmarks suggested by the Reviewer (CompPrompt and ControlledImCaps). However, these were unfortunately not publicly available. Nevertheless, we turned to two well-established baselines for multimodal perceptual understanding and compositionality: ARO (Yuksekgonul et al. (ICLR 2023)) and VL-Checklist (Zhao et al. (EMNLP 2022)). The results, shown below, indicate that TULIP consistently outperforms CLIP and surpasses Long-CLIP in 4 out of 7 settings.
| Model | ARO VGR | ARO VGA | ARO FLICKR | ARO COCO | VLC Obj | VLC Att | VLC Rel |
|--------------|----------|----------|------------|----------|----------|----------|----------|
| CLIP | 59.9 | 63.1 | 60.2 | 47.9 | 81.1 | 67.6 | 61.9 |
| Long-CLIP | **64.6** | **66.6** | 24.8 | 23.3 | 84.3 | 71.6 | **63.5** |
| **TULIP (Ours)** | 63.4 | 66.2 | **52.3** | **43.9** | **85.2** | **74.3** | 62.7 |
**Improved performance in shorter contexts (Table 2).** We attribute the improved performance on short-caption retrieval to using *relative positional encodings*. This allows TULIP to dynamically encode token relationships by modeling their dependencies without being constrained by fixed positions. This benefits both short and long contexts. To validate this, we perform an additional experiment to train TULIP with absolute encodings and compare it to its original version where we use relative ones. We present the top R@1 results below, where it can be observed that relative encodings indeed yield much better performance in short-caption retrieval for all four settings.
| Method | COCO I2T | COCO T2I | Flickr I2T | Flickr T2I |
|----------------------|----------|----------|------------|------------|
| TULIP w/ Absolute | 58.1 | 41.4 | 48.7 | 34.0 |
| **TULIP w/ Relative (RoPE)** | **62.6** | **46.1** | **56.7** | **41.6** |
**Results in Table 4 compared to Tables 1 and 3.** Table 4 reflects the performance of the distilled models before the relative position expansion phase, whereas Tables 1 and 3 present results after full training is completed. This distinction was intentional, as Table 4 specifically aims to isolate and analyze the relative position distillation stage, allowing us to evaluate the effectiveness of different distillation losses. To address the potential confusion, we will revise the caption of Table 4 to clarify this point.
We hope this addresses your concerns. We appreciate your consideration and hope this motivates you to upgrade your score. Please let us know if you have any further questions.