(Q1-part1) Response to the after-rebuttal questions raised by Reviewer W7ZQ.
We sincerely appreciate your acknowledgment of our proposed method as an inspiring work and for the commendable performance of our framework. This recognition serves as an encouragement in our research endeavors. Next, we will address your after-rebuttal questions in detail.
## Q1
Thank you for your thoughtful and detailed feedback. We appreciate the points you've raised and would like to address your concerns directly from the following perspectives.
* **The research objective and insights of our work.**
1. **Performance vs. Insights:** As stated in the Abstract and Introduction of the paper, our insight is that the key to accomplishing AI-generated text detection resides in distinguishing the multi-level writing styles of different "authors", rather than just modeling this task as a binary classification problem. Therefore, based on this key insight, we design the DeTeCtive framework. Specifically, we define multi-level positive and negative sample pairs according to the affinity relations between different language models and derive a multi-level contrastive learning loss function. Eventually, we accomplish the learning of multi-level features through contrastive learning. Moreover, under the DeTective framework, we do not focus on improving binary classification performance. Instead, within our framework, the model's learning objective is to capture multi-level features among different large language models. The principal objective function is the multi-level contrastive learning loss we designed, rather than a simple binary cross-entropy loss. Furthermore, our classification method is based on the K-Nearest Neighbors (KNN) clustering of embeddings. Therefore, the improvement in model performance results from successful learning of multi-level features rather than relying on the classification head. Hence, both the initial intent of framework design and the way of model learning reflect our insights. We believe that the end-to-end method we proposed, which outperforms baselines (e.g., SCL/PCL) and all the comparison methods (e.g., DetectGPT, GPT-Sentinal, CoCo) by a significant margin, is not just a trivial improvement. The substantial performance gains suggest that our method is capturing internal patterns and nuances that are specific to AI-generated text. These internal insights could offer valuable perspectives on how machines differentiate between human and AI-generated content effectively.
2. **Human-Friendly Insights vs. Machine Efficiency:** As elaborated above, our understanding and insights of this task are reflected in the design of the method and framework. The visualization of learned text features also reveals that features at different levels (e.g., by model famliy, by individual model) could cluster well, which is something typical supervised contrastive learning (SCL) cannot achieve due to the lack of multi-level relationship constraints. We believe that the insights upheld by our paper, namely, that the key to accomplishing AI-generated text detection task resides in distinguishing the multi-level writing styles of different "authors", is intuitive and human-friendly. The effectiveness of our approach has also been proven through comprehensive experiments and the results are also consistent with our insights.
* **Weaknesses of existing works.**
1. **Unsatisfactory generalizability:** The out-of-distribution (OOD) detection results shown in Table2 of our original submission, the performance of existing methods on OOD data is quite poor. This suggests that the handcrafted features and their insights discovered are challenging to generalize to OOD data, significantly hindering the practical application of the algorithm. Considering the rapid development of language models, this presents a problem.
2. **Performance bottlenecks and lack of comprehensive evaluations:** Compared to our work, existing solutions lack a comprehensive evaluation on various benchmarks, testing scenarios and other applications. The experimental results of existing methods on multiple benchmarks are not ideal, indicating that there are performance bottlenecks. However, our method surpasses the existing state-of-the-art solutions by a large margin on each individual dataset.