Weaknesses
* While the authors are upright about the major limitation of the work, scaling with respect to dimensionality, this, unfortunately, strongly limits the practicality of the work. To me, for a VI algorithm to be useful, it should at least be scalable with respect to $d$, the dimensionality of the posterior, or $n$, the number of datapoints. Unfortunately, the proposed approach seems to achieve neither. In particular, the eigenvalue problem formulation is very cute but it isn't clear if subsampling results in an unbiased objective to be scalable with respect to $n$. (Please correct me if this is not the case!)
* The evaluation is not adequate for a work proposing a new variational family. The two baseline variational families considered here are the full-rank Gaussian variational family and normalizing flows. There is a rather long history of developing less-parametric variational families in VI. For instance, boosting VI [1], copulas [2,3], splines [4], semi-implicit families [5], mixtures [6], and many more. These works should be the main focus of the evaluation, not Gaussian VI.
* Unless I am not mistaken, the method suffers in the case the posterior is not *a priori* standardized. It doesn't seem like such standardization would be possible unless some preliminary inference has already been performed. This would defeat the point of using a VI algorithm. If one has already obtained preconditioners, why not just provide them to an MCMC algorithm instead?
* The paper doesn't discuss how to solve the eigenvalue problem. Given that we only need to solve a specific eigenvalue problem, there might be clever ways to solve it in a scalable way, maybe by using randomized linear algebra methods, which could technically be interesting.
Overall, I hope to see at least some evidence that the proposed methodology will eventually lead to a practical algorithm in the future. For instance, whether subsampling results in an unbiased/consistent algorithm. If this is the case, I would be happy to re-assess the paper.
## Additional Comments
* The Fisher divergence and the score-matching problem were introduced to the machine-learning community through the work of Hyvarinen [7], which isn't cited.
* Related works: A discussion on the literature of non-parametric/"less-parametric" VI algorithms seems necessary.
* Line 30 "One thread of BBVI research focuses on Gaussian variational approximations. (ADVI, BBVI)": I wouldn't quite agree with this statement since ADVI is applicable to any family where the reparameterization gradient is applicable. In fact, when normalizing flows are used with ELBO maximization, this is pretty much the same as ADVI. Furthermore, the original BBVI paper [8] requires conjugacy, meaning that one cannot simply use Gaussian variational families at all in a lot of cases.
* A lot of the references are citing the arXiv version. Berg et al. 2018 was published at UAI; Dinh et al. 2016 was published at ICLR 2017; Giordano et al. 2023 was published in JMLR; and etc. Please thoroughly review the reference section.
* Line 39, Section 2.1: Citing something when mentioning orthogonal functions would be better so that readers interested in the topic could have a look into more in-depth material.
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