Summary
The paper studies the important problem of private learning of the Gaussian mixture model to estimate the underlying distribution within a desired total variation distance. By combining different techniques, the authors succeed in deriving bounds that are of quadratic dimension, thus significantly improving the existing results.
Strengths
The paper contains several new results that significantly improve the state of the art. These include i) Theorem 1.3, which establishes a bound with quadratic complexity for any dimension, ii) Theorem 1.4, which proposes an improved bound for $d=1$, showing that the sample complexity can be linear in the number of components, iii) Theorem 1.5, which proposes a lower bound on the sample complexity. The latter, combined with Theorem 1.4, shows the optimality of the established bounds for the univariate Gaussian distributions. In addition, the paper is generally well and smoothly written.
Weaknesses
- The paper could benefit from some numerical verifications of the results/algorithms used.
- The appendix section is poorly organized. Without an outline and proof, it is difficult to follow such a long appendix.
Questions
1. It would be better to explain more the difference between density estimation and parameter estimation.
2. How do the bounds of Theorems 1.3, 1.4., and 1.5 behave with respect to the failure probability $\beta$ order-wise?
3. Can the authors discuss the assumption $R=n^{100}$ (line 160) a bit more? Why does it depend on $n$ (and not $k$ or $d$?)? Also, is the polynomial dependence restrictive?
4. The first sentence of the informal statement of Theorem 2.1. does not seem rigorous enough. Is such a $\tilde{\Sigma}$ unique? I don't think so. Then, if not, which choice of $\tilde{\Sigma}$ is taken into account when computing $V_{\eta}(\mathbf{X})$? Probably maximum volume?
5. The appendix sections are very difficult to follow. There should be a detailed outline at the beginning to guide the reader as to what each appendix deals with. Also, there should be sufficient references in the main text. For example, after the informal statement of Theorem 2.1., it should be clearly stated where the full statement and proof can be found. Similarly, after each paragraph (e.g., Section 2.1) or after each mentioned previously established result (e.g., advanced composition theorem), there should be an exact pointer to where the complete version can be found in the appendices.
6. Since the submission was allowed for 9 pages, the authors had 1.5 more pages. I think some material from the appendices, for example the algorithms used to privately learn GMM, could be moved to the main text.
7. Finally, what is missing the most is the experimental section. If I'm not mistaken, this should be easy to do. Although not all theoretical work requires experimental verification, I believe that if the experiments verify the theoretical finding, this would greatly increase the importance of the results.
Minor comments:
- Line 52: it is better to add "The parameters $\alpha$ and $\beta$...".
- The constant $c^*$ in Theorem 1.5. does not appear in the bound.
- In the first paragraph of Section 2.1, it is mentioned that "... as we can finish the procedure with hypothesis selection, as discussed above". However, hypothesis selection has not been sufficiently discussed.
- Is it true that the intuition given in Section 2.1. holds if $ n \gg k^2$?
- Typo line 178 (a a)
- Is $k$ in lines 203-204 the number of components in the Gaussian mixture? Why does this statement ("if we altered $k$ data points...") only hold for $k$ changes?