Summary
This paper investigates the differences between internal and external certainty as measured in language models (LMs). The authors clearly differentiate these two conceptual types of certainty, each supported by a solid body of literature, and explore whether these measures are consistent, as one could hope. Their findings indicate a low correlation between the two, raising concerns about the reliability of certainty assessments derived from LMs.
The authors thoroughly survey relevant literature, carefully defining and explaining essential terms, which strengthens their argument about the inconsistency between internal and external certainty. Internal certainty, often measured by the probabilities a model assigns to an answer relative to alternatives, contrasts with external certainty, which is typically gauged by linguistic attributes of the generated answer. While internal certainty has received more research attention, external certainty is more intuitive and accessible for end-users, making the weak correlation between these measures particularly noteworthy.
The study uses a newly curated dataset to train models for estimating external certainty and applies an existing approach for internal certainty estimation. The primary results, based on their highest-performing model, underscore the weak correlation between the two metrics.
Overall, this paper tackles an important research question and presents intriguing findings. While I found no major flaws, there are several areas where further refinement could strengthen the work, outlined below.
Conclusive, Extensive Results for the Claims
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The authors argue that internal and external certainty are distinct conceptual metrics, with the former being more complex to measure. However, they only test one internal certainty method, from Rivera et al., 2024. To support the broad claims made, additional methods for estimating internal certainty should be evaluated to rule out the possibility that this inconsistency arises from the limitations of a single method.
Writing
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While the paper is generally well-organized, certain sections would benefit from a rewrite to enhance clarity and add detail.
The lack of a dedicated background/related work section is noticeable. The paper contains comprehensive background material, but it is interspersed across different sections, making it hard to delineate the authors’ contributions from previous work. Separating this content could enhance readability. For example, lines 73-102 in the introduction and lines 177-185 include related work content. The first paragraph of Section 2.2 also repeats related work. Consolidating this information in a single section could make room for additional details where they are currently lacking.
Other areas that could benefit from elaboration include the collected labels/data used to train the external certainty model. Providing a few sample data points would help readers understand the data domain better. Similarly, the setup for training the external certainty model lacks clarity. Details on how the dataset is split into training, validation, and test sets would be helpful.
Additionally, the dataset for this research is derived from news articles dating back at least seven years, based on a 2017 paper. Some information may now be factually outdated, potentially influencing the paper’s conclusions. This consideration warrants a brief discussion. Moreover, in line 296, the reference to Rivera et al. 2024 should specify which method was used for internal certainty measurement, as they employ multiple methods; detailing this would improve transparency.
Additional Writing Comments
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Note: these are not as important for the overall assessment, but the authors should consider them for their revision
- Line 270: Replace “coder” with “annotator,” a more standard term.
- Line 271: Specify whether the 800 data points were sampled from each source or in total.
- Line 273: Instead of “around 0.7,” provide the exact value.
- Line 303: Explicitly state which model performed best.
- Line 314: Indicate the exact gap in performance.
- Figure 2: Replace the legend with model names on the x-axis ticks for clarity.
- Table 1: Consider adding an average score.
- Section 6: This could be a subsection of Section 5.
- Line 442: Expanding the discussion of this result in the text would be beneficial.
- Line 446: The described correlation is moderate, not strong.
- Line 469: Add a citation for “silicon sampling,” as this term isn’t standard.
- Figure 4a: Ensure the tick values are clearly indicated on the top figure.
Strengths
- The paper poses an intriguing question about the connection between internal and external certainty in language models.
- It provides interesting results, highlighting the need for further work on reliable certainty estimation.
Weaknesses
- The experiments are limited,relying on a single certainty estimation method, leading to overstatements of the findings.
- The writing could benefit from added detail and examples to enhance clarity.
Questions
1. Lines 47 and 51: What distinguishes the bullet points in these lines? They appear very similar to me.
2. Line 113: What specific “risk” is being referred to here? Do you believe it represents a substantial risk? Could you elaborate?
3. Internal Certainty Calculations: Internal certainty is derived using multiple generations or answers. Are multiple generations also considered in the calculation of external certainty, or only a single one? The exact calculation method for external certainty isn’t entirely clear.
4. Line 270: What qualifies the three annotators as experts? Experts in what? Is there any difference in agreement between experts and non experts?
5. How were the experts/non experts recruited? How much were they paid?
6. Figure 2: How is it possible for the MSE to exceed 1? Aren’t the values between 0-1?
7. Line 414: Where do these statements originate from?
8. The data used from Wang, 2017 is at least 7 years old. Did you consider some of the statements there to be factually incorrect anymore?