Summary
This paper investigates when localized receptive fields arise in supervised neural networks. Extending a recent work of Ingrosso and Goldt, the authors propose that simple single-neuron models learn localized receptive fields when trained on data with sufficiently negative excess kurtosis, while if the excess kurtosis is sufficiently positive they learn delocalized receptive fields.
Strengths
The topic of this paper is of broad interest in both machine learning and neuroscience, and on the whole I think this manuscript makes a worthy contribution on top of the work of Ingrosso and Goldt. There are some weaknesses which dampen my enthusiasm (see below), but on the whole I favor acceptance.
Weaknesses
I have two primary concerns about the results presented:
- First, Lemma 3.1's treatment of time is not sufficiently precise. Can you provide a more precise answer than simply "early in training" or "before A.3 is violated"? Indeed, the logic in the paragraph beginning on Line 174 is not clear. What you show is that, in some cases (see concern below), eq. (5) generates localized RFs in a similar location to those observed in actual training. This does necessarily mean that "the gradient flow in Eq. (5) holds sufficiently long to detect the emergence of localization in the weights," as you write in Lines 177-178. Moreover, you have not in fact defined what you mean by "detect the emergence of localization;" this must be reified. Can you see a change in participation ratio, even if only numerically, before the approximation breaks down?
- Second, the experiments are rather limited, and rely largely on exemplars rather than systematic statistical investigation. This is important given the gap in Lemma 3.1: the authors rely on experiments to justify their claim that this approximation provides meaningful information about when localization will occur, but all they actually show is that there is resemblance in a few cases. The paper would be much stronger if the authors could also show that their claims hold statistically over many realizations of the data generation process and training procedure.
Questions
- A neuroscientific quibble: in the first sentence of the Introduction (Line 19), one need not restrict attention to the "mammalian nervous system." There are numerous examples of localized receptive fields in non-mammalian species; see for instance the beautiful works of Knudsen & Konishi on audition in owls.
- The authors might consider citing Sengupta et al., "Manifold-tiling Localized Receptive Fields are Optimal in Similarity-preserving Neural Networks" (NeurIPS 2018) in their discussion of unsupervised learning algorithms that give localized receptive fields.
- Another potentially relevant reference is Shinn, "Phantom oscillations in principal component analysis" (PNAS 2023).
- The reference in Footnote 3 is wrong; it should be to Appendix C.2 not C.3.
- In Line 187, there is a small typo: "termdepends" -> "term depends"
- Using a perceptually uniform non-grayscale colormap to represent time might improve the legibility of the plots relative to the grayscale used in the submitted manuscript.
- The final paragraph of the conclusion is not tied to anything that came before; if you care about orientation selectivity you should mention & measure it in earleir portions of the paper. Otherwise, this should be omitted.
Limitations
The authors do a largely adequate job of discussing the limitations of their work, up to the technical weaknesses noted above.