Summary
The authors propose a hierarchical dense retrieval (not generative retrieval) method (***This claim is crucial because the paper's writing from a generative retrieval perspective can be misleading***). Since it is hierarchical, it is essential to consider the source of the documents' hierarchical information. In this paper, the hierarchical structure of the documents is derived from the distances between the initial document embeddings, representing an implicit form of hierarchical information.
Strengths
I believe the proposed method is versatile, as it combines dense retrieval with implicit hierarchical information without relying on externally defined document relationships.
Weaknesses
1. The writing logic of this paper is highly misleading. The authors begin by discussing generative retrieval, claiming that its drawback is the inability to update documents. However, the method they propose is actually a dense retrieval approach, and they claim their method supports document updating and zero-shot retrieval as advantages. However, any dense retrieval method naturally supports document updates. ***If the logic of this paper were valid, anyone developing a dense retrieval method in the future could simply use the limitations of generative retrieval as motivation for their work.***
2. Since the authors essentially propose a hierarchical dense retrieval method, it is important to introduce and compare it with existing dense retrieval methods that learn hierarchical information. Unfortunately, the paper completely skips this most relevant part.
2.1. First, credit should be given to previous hierarchical dense retrieval methods, e.g., [1], including a related work section to provide an overview.
2.2. The paper should explain how their approach differs from previous hierarchical dense retrieval methods and where it might offer advantages.
2.3. A fair comparison with previous hierarchical dense retrieval methods should be conducted in the experiments.
3. Compared to previous hierarchical dense retrieval methods, I do not find this paper to have sufficient novelty. Perhaps this is why the authors chose to skip related work on hierarchical dense retrieval and instead writing from generative retrieval.
[1] Liu, Y., Hashimoto, K., Zhou, Y., Yavuz, S., Xiong, C., & Yu, P. S. (2021). Dense hierarchical retrieval for open-domain question answering. arXiv preprint arXiv:2110.15439.
Questions
1. First, I hope the authors address the weaknesses mentioned above.
2. “Generative retrieval employs sequence models for conditional generation of document IDs based on a query (DSI (Tay et al., 2022); NCI (Wang et al., 2022); inter alia). While this has led to improved performance in zero-shot retrieval …”. The claim that generative retrieval leads to improved performance in zero-shot retrieval is inaccurate or even entirely incorrect. Both DSI and NCI require training to achieve any level of effectiveness; without training, their performance would be negligible. As far as I understand, generative retrieval fundamentally relies on training and does not inherently address the challenges of zero-shot retrieval.
3. “better performance in unsupervised settings when adapted to a new corpus without any labeled training data.” It is unclear which previous work has substantiated this assertion. I am carious how the authors conclude this claim from the previous generative retrieval works.
4. “Here we examine the innovations of generative retrieval and identify the key important distinction with dense retrieval approaches to date: tiered hierarchical negative sample”. Could the author provide more explanation and motivation in the introduction? Presenting just this term without any explanation of its meaning might leave readers confused.
5. “These embeddings are updated under gradient descent for every training iteration. This is different from contrastive learning in dense retrievers, where usually a small set of negative samples are sampled from the corpus.” This claim is incorrect. There is no fundamental difference between the automatic version and dense retrieval. The atomic version can train document embeddings only because the dataset used, such as NQ320K, has a relatively small number of documents. In this case, all documents other than the positive ones can be considered as negative examples. However, when the number of documents increases, negative sampling becomes necessary.
6. Please include a related work section, particularly focusing on previous work related to hierarchical dense retrieval, in future revisions.
7. Please add methods from hierarchical dense retrieval as baselines, as this is crucial for determining whether the proposed method is effective.
8. I suggest that the authors avoid framing the paper from the perspective of generative retrieval. While the work may have been inspired by generative retrieval hierarchy IDs, since the focus is on hierarchical dense retrieval, the writing should be approached from that standpoint.