Summary
The paper proposes a method to introduce time-variance in gated-recurrence models (GSS, H3, Hyena). The authors compute a surrogate attention mode to highlight the structure of the resulting data-controlled operator, and evaluate performance on small-scale language modeling (Wikitext103).
Questions
I'll start with some minor clarifying questions:
* I find the value of 3.2 and 3.3 rather limited. For 3.2 specifically, time-variance does not affect parallel-scan compatibility with recurrences. See e.g, section 1.4.1 in Blelloch's "Prefix Sums and Their Applications", where the state-to-state parameters $a_i$ are already specified with a dependence on time. Can the authors elaborate on what is new or interesting about their exposition? (other than the diagram, which I appreciate!). For 3.3, it would have been useful to visualize the resulting surrogate attention matrices learned in some synthetic or language tasks. Could you elaborate on why you think this specific reweighting of queries and keys, resulting from the underlying time-varying system, is an appropriate parametrization?
* Is your surrogate attention matrix complex? Do you find any meaningful performance difference compared to a time-varying system with real states? How does the fact your parallel scan operates on a complex-valued sequence affect performance? It would be useful to see these comparisons.
* You use a sigmoid to parametrize the magnitude of the poles of the system. Can you motivate this choice further, ideally with an ablation study? I am not convinced the quality difference would be significant.
* The results in Table 1 are strange, especially given the fact that the authors did not rerun the baseline numbers. The perplexity gap is larger, ~13 perplexity is generally too low for small (125M) models on wikitext. As this is the only experiment, can you provide more details? Model depth, width, parametrization, learning rates, batch size, sequence length...
* How does this model compare to other gated recurrences with time-variance (e.g., GRUs, LSTMs).
* There are broken links and references e.,g section ? just before equation 9.
In summary: the idea to introduce time-variance in this way is simple and (potentially) effective. The experiments are, however, incomplete, and the novelty limited.
Confidence
4: You are confident in your assessment, but not absolutely certain. It is unlikely, but not impossible, that you did not understand some parts of the submission or that you are unfamiliar with some pieces of related work.