Response to Reviewer 2
Thank you for your thoughtful and constructive feedback. We address your comments and questions below.
### Q1. The writing and presentation can be further improved, since there are numerous typos and unclear notation or concept definitions. To list some, there is no clear introduction to the general paradigm of unlabeled OOD detection algorithms, and the preliminary about OOD detection is unclear in how to detect the OOD sample beyond using $P(y \notin Y_{in} | x)$
A1. We have updated the paper to remove typos and improve definitions. Regarding the introduction of unlabeled OOD detection, the authors acknowledge that the previous version lacked any specific description in the preliminaries section of the paper. We have added a paragraph in Section 2 explaining how unlabeled OOD differs from labeled OOD. In Section 2, we have also added a description of the baseline OOD detector, maximum softmax probability. We agree that providing an example OOD detector is very important in that section.
### Q2. The motivation and practical significance for considering self-supervised OOD detection is not clear. Given the current presentation and introduction content, the reviewer can hardly understand why we should conduct unlabeled OOD detection.
A2. We have updated the introduction to explain why one might wish to pursue unlabeled OOD detection. Some of the reasons include saving costs on labeling and allowing a model to scale to extremely large unlabeled datasets. There is also growing interest in training large self-supervised models that do not rely on labels, such as unconditional diffusion models. Building such models with robust OOD detection functionality could greatly improve their efficacy in real-world, especially safety-critical situations. Given these reasons, a good number of self-supervised OOD detection methods (see the references in the second paragraph of the introduction section) have emerged with promising results.
### Q3. If we have the pre-trained model on the ID data, even if we adopt the self-supervised learning in pertaining, can we have the pseudo label for those unlabeled data for OOD detection?
A3. Assuming that a pseudo labeling process would involve some initial data that is labeled, such a process would not be considered unlabeled and beyond the scope of this work. Further work would be needed to investigate that scenario. Generally, adding labels will improve OOD detection performance and it is possible to use a mix of labeled and unlabeled data. See paper (Du et al 2024)
### Q4. It could be better to illustrate the overall research setting using some figure or framework before the existing Figure 1 for a better explanation.
A4. Thank you for the suggestion. We have added a figure (Figure 1 on page 2 of the revised paper) to provide a visualization of the unlabeled and labeled OOD processes.
### Q5. It seems there are no explicit assumptions for the theoretical results and most theoretical results are based on the sufficiency definition in definition 2.1 and the minimal sufficient statistic in definition 2.2. It is questionable whether the theoretical insights reflect the real-world challenge or not, as there is limited empirical justification for those intermediate theoretical results based on mutual information. It could be better if the presentation incorporated more quantitative results regarding the mutual information.
A5. There are notable existing works that study the information bottleneck effect of deep learning models by investigating mutual information between the input, model learned representations, and the output. For example, the work by (Federici et al., 2020) theoretically demonstrates the information bottleneck effect, the minimal sufficient statistic, and how mutual information affects neural networks. The theories are empirically verified through comprehensive quantitative results, where the reviewer can refer to.
To better connect our theoretical insights with real-world challenges, we have revised the paper to propose two concepts in Section 3.1: **strict label blindness** and **approximate label blindness**. Strict label blindness is equivalent to the label blindness proposed in the earlier draft. Approximate label blindness describes situations where the mutual information between the learning objective and labels is close to zero. We utilize Fano’s inequality to establish a lower bound for classification error based on the mutual information content, such that low mutual information leads to a high lower bound for the prediction error. Under the approximate label blindness scenario, we expect the OOD algorithm to behave almost as poorly as in the strict label blindness scenario. Our empirical results evaluate the approximate label blindness condition, which should be more relevant for real world situations.
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